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焯寧 | 1st Oct 2007, 15:55 | 愛情 | (431 Reads)

她拖著疲憊的身軀, 糜爛的心走下被窩, 從抽屜取出早有預謀的安眠藥,

她握在手中掙扎著她為他的第一次, 她不想倚賴它, 無奈她已倚賴了他!

嗗碌碌的喝下去, 飛快似的再次鑽進被窩, 生怕藥力一瞬即逝!

她靜靜的躺著.....躺著.....等待著腦袋被控制的剎那!

然而他的毒比任何藥物來得更凶更猛, 他佔據了她全身上下的細胞, 她的靈魂, 她的所有!

號令他們瘋狂地在她體內肆意奔騰, 橫衝直撞至體無完膚,

折磨她的心智至心神恍惚, 鞭打著血肉模糊的心, 還有一想到他會顫抖的身軀!

她曾經意圖放下, 只是他就如鬼魅般纏付著, 縈迴無邊無際的苦海裡!

她忘不了彼此所說所做的, 忘不了曾經彼此相愛, 他曾經的赴湯蹈火,

他們的甜言蜜語, 他們共渡浪漫時光, 他們的一切!

然而每次她要求忘記時就如處死般痛苦, 她不甘心! 她不願就此死去!

本應相愛的卻偏偏不能愛, 本應可喜的卻換來滿身傷痕累累, 無奈也無助!

只是不願死的終究都要死, 如果可以的話她情願從未認識過!

 

 

他.......跟它.........在腦海裡..............爭持著....................................直至淚人兒緩緩睡去!

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認識我很久的人都知從前膽粗粗的學人寫小說寫散文,

只是用詞卑劣不見得人, 最重要是寫了一點點之後靈感沒了, 再寫不下去!

偶爾過一過癮還不錯, 當一個作家我自問沒這個本事!

從前看過我東西的朋友都會問故事裡是不是你自己,

不騙人的的確投入了一些個人因素可不是全部,

上次寫作的時候也是情感有分岔時,

證明我這個人每當遇到這種事才有靈感和興趣!

 

最近愛上白酒, 在寂靜夜晚他跟月兒對酒當歌!



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M.LeE :
話時話~ 我同sum都講..見無人提返去過節食飯咁...??@_@

M.LeE : 因為只有我爸這一家咋!


[引用] | 作者 寧彩臣 | 5th Oct 2007 17:34 | [舉報垃圾留言]

[4] Re:
k3q :
putting personal experience and feeling in writing story is always that easy but seldom be the best..sometime need to add some thrid person view in it so can understand what you are writing and acheive the improvement.
Nice new songs again and white wine ranks top in my favourite drinks list!

k3q : thx yr opinion i'll keep going! it seems so many ppl like white wine, in fact white wine is better than red wine i think!


[引用] | 作者 寧彩臣 | 5th Oct 2007 17:33 | [舉報垃圾留言]

[3] Re:
tongman :
I am lying alone with my head on the phone
Thinking of you till it hurts
I know you hurt too, but what else can we do
Tormented and torn apart
I wish I could carry your smile in my heart
For times when my life seems so low
It could make me believe what tomorrow could bring
When today doesn't really know, doesn't really know
I'm all out of love
I'm so lost without you
I know you were right
Believing for so long
I'm all out of love
What am I without you?
I can't be too late
To say (I know) that I was so wrong
I want you to come back and carry me home
Away from these long lonely nights
I'm reaching for you, are you feeling it too
That's the feeling say oh so right
And one word you say if I call on you now
Say that I can't hold on
Where there's no easy way,
It gets harder each day
Please love me or I'll be gone, I'll be gone
Love, what are you thinking of
What are you thinking of
scorpio just never be easy when break up
never.......even just playing around
they just cant accept someone giving them up......

tongman : yeah...u r right but i'm fine now, time can wash everything away!


[引用] | 作者 寧彩臣 | 5th Oct 2007 17:29 | [舉報垃圾留言]

[2]

putting personal experience and feeling in writing story is always that easy but seldom be the best..sometime need to add some thrid person view in it so can understand what you are writing and acheive the improvement.

Nice new songs again and white wine ranks top in my favourite drinks list!


[引用] | 作者 k3q | 4th Oct 2007 02:48 | [舉報垃圾留言]

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I am lying alone with my head on the phone
Thinking of you till it hurts
I know you hurt too, but what else can we do
Tormented and torn apart

I wish I could carry your smile in my heart
For times when my life seems so low
It could make me believe what tomorrow could bring
When today doesn't really know, doesn't really know

I'm all out of love
I'm so lost without you
I know you were right
Believing for so long
I'm all out of love
What am I without you?
I can't be too late
To say (I know) that I was so wrong

I want you to come back and carry me home
Away from these long lonely nights
I'm reaching for you, are you feeling it too
That's the feeling say oh so right

And one word you say if I call on you now
Say that I can't hold on
Where there's no easy way,
It gets harder each day
Please love me or I'll be gone, I'll be gone

Love, what are you thinking of
What are you thinking of

scorpio just never be easy when break up
never.......even just playing around
they just cant accept someone giving them up......


[引用] | 作者 tongman | 1st Oct 2007 23:52 | [舉報垃圾留言]